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Honoring the Old Lion

A few months ago, I was in a small antiques shop in Oklahoma City when I came across a faded, worn hardcover lying on a cluttered table. There was no dust jacket, no cover art whatsoever. The buckram had originally been blue; now it’s faded to a steely gray, and the spine is a brittle, sun-faded brown.

Because of my allergies, I forced myself years ago to give up used books. No collecting. No browsing through the musty aisle of tempting treasures. No rare or old editions. I live in the desert of no old books.

But now and then I pick up a volume to give it a look … as an individual crawling in the sand clutches a cup of water.

This ugly book had nothing attractive about it. However, centered on the cover were two words in white script: Professional Writing.

My breath caught. I pounced.

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It was indeed a text on writing from Walter S. Campbell, founder of the professional writing program at the University of Oklahoma. A man whom I consider to be my literary great-grandfather. Campbell wrote numerous books on old west history and biography under the pen name Stanley Vestal. He taught fiction writing in OU’s English department during the 1930s and ’40s. This was the heyday of the American short story market. Campbell’s students were so successful at selling their work that trouble began brewing with other English faculty whose students were not selling. Whether the problem was sour grapes or simple jealousy, the rift grew so serious that in the 1950s, Campbell and his students walked out.

Where were they going to go?

The journalism school on campus was just getting started. Its director needed students, even if they weren’t interested in working on the fledgling newspaper. The school changed its name to Journalism and Mass Communication, and Campbell and his class settled in. It became an odd alliance that has somehow worked down through the years, with PW still focused on teaching the craft and methodologies of writing that have worked since Aristotle. Students are still selling their work, provided they work hard and get their manuscripts in the hands of editors. Students have included various novelists such as Tony Hillerman, Louis L’Amour, Carolyn Hart, Curtiss Ann Matlock, and Jim Butcher, to name only a few.

When I was a student in the program, I took “Writing the Short Story” in a classroom dedicated to honoring Campbell. It had a brass plate on the door, designating it as the “Stanley Vestal Memorial Classroom.” Inside, students sat at long, blond-wood tables. Large glass display cases at the back of the room held copies of Cambell’s books. His portrait hung on the wall, and it was painted in such a way that his eyes followed you around the room. Until I took the class, I’d never heard of my major program’s founder. But I learned about him and what he stood for and believed in when it came to writing.

He was followed in the program by a fiesty writer named Foster-Harris. Google the name. You’ll find his books on plotting still available. Foster is my literary great-uncle. His breakdown of story climax is one of the best I’ve encountered. Then came a teacher called Dwight Swain. Dwight is my literary grandfather. He’d retired from the classroom by the time I enrolled, but I was assigned his text on writing, TECHNIQUES OF THE SELLING WRITER, and I read it until the binding split. If you met Dwight at a party, he’d always ask what you were working on, and if you confessed you were stuck, he could put his finger on the problem instantly.

One of his ablest pupils was a hard-headed Yankee named Jack Bickham. It took Dwight many patient coaching sessions before he finally hammered the principles of story craft into Jack’s stubborn head, but once Jack “got it,” his career took off like a rocket.

Jack shone best, however, in the classroom. His personality might be intimidating, but his teaching was phenomenal. His ability to explain the writing craft opened doors to me and explained mysteries that had kept me stymied as I attempted to write my first wobbly stories. Jack was my literary father.

But today’s blog is supposed to be more about Campbell than his successors. In the antiques shop, I picked up the battered old book and opened it. After hearing so much about his teaching, this was the first time I’d actually gotten my hands on his textbook.

It was dated 1937, and he’d autographed it to a student named Rosalie. Not only do I now have his book, mine to study and learn from, but I have his signature. In my imagination, I can conjure up a tall, distinguished man–a pipe in his teeth–scratching out a rapid little note with his fountain pen. How proud and excited Rosalie must have felt, standing there–perhaps after class–while her teacher signed her copy.

 

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Last year, I went to a local estate sale and was digging around the bits and pieces remaining in the last hour of the sale when I turned and saw a large, framed, black-and-white photograph. I recognized him immediately–that wide brow, the strong jaw and tidily clipped mustache, a kind mouth, and the intelligent, deep-set eyes that look right at you. The photo was obviously what Campbell’s oil portrait had been painted from. I had seen that calm, wise countenance almost daily for years–first as a student and later when I began to teach in the program. I bought the photo for six dollars and carried it home with a thrill that hasn’t faded. Today, Campbell’s likeness hangs in my office, directly behind where I sit when I write my novels, where I’m writing this blog now.

 

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It seems to remind me that good craftsmanship is always worth striving for, no matter how tired and discouraged I might sometimes become. It speaks to me of where I’ve come from, of the traditions that have shaped me, and of the training I’ve worked so hard to assimilate.

Yesterday, I found myself in that same small antiques shop I mentioned earlier. On the same table, I came across another battered hardcover book. Its blue buckram cover is a little fancier. There’s still no cover art, but the plain title has been outlined in gold. The cloth has been worn smooth from use and handling. The edges are worn white. There’s no author signature on the inside cover this time. The edition is 1946, almost ten years apart from my other copy. The pages are heavily underlined in pencil by its first, enthusiastic owner.

I see no other changes, no real differences from the 1937 edition. Why buy two copies of a musty old book, written by a man long gone?

Call me a fan. Call me grateful for his legacy.

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The Barrier of Fear

When it comes to writing fiction, a big hindrance to idea development is fear.

Ever think or hope that you have a good idea for a story but you’re afraid of it? Are you afraid to believe?

Maybe you lack the belief that it’s good enough to write or good enough to be published. Maybe you don’t think you can do it. 

Maybe you don’t feel you have the skills necessary.

Maybe you’re just psychologically skittish at the prospect of really coming up with something worthwhile.

Maybe you’re unsure you have what it takes to commit yourself physically, mentally, and emotionally to a long fiction project such as a novel.

Whatever the reason, fear can throw a roadblock across our path and stop our potential project in its tracks.

Now, it’s easy for me to quote FDR (“The only thing we have to fear is fear itself.”) and it’s easy for me to tell you to just get over your doubts and insecurities. As the Nike ad used to say–in another context–“Just do it!”

But if you’re floundering in a morass of uncertainty, you need a rope to drag you from it–not a pep talk. So here’s some rope; grab on!

The best way to conquer fear of writing is to gain confidence in your technical skills.

You gain confidence in your technical skills by studying and practicing the writing craft. Pore over the technique books of Jack Bickham and Dwight V. Swain. Follow their advice as best you can, then mark up a chapter or short story by one of your favorite authors and see if you can identify how viewpoint is established or how characters are introduced vividly.

Have faith in your idea.

The Bible defines faith as belief in something unseen.

So do you have faith in your own story sense? Do you think you have a good idea?

Have you tested it along the points I mentioned in my last post?

If it passed those questions, and if it’s still alive in your head and heart, then run it through screenplay teacher Robert McKee’s tests:

*Does your idea have inherent conflict in the situation?

*Is your idea original?

Inherent conflict makes your job as a writer so much easier than if you try to stick conflict onto a bland situation.

Compare the following:

A. Two men–rivals at work and in love with the same woman–are unexpectedly trapped in a malfunctioning elevator.

B. Two men–team members and close friends from childhood–must suddenly come to grips with their feelings when their beloved coach dies.

Neither idea is a bad one. A skilled writer could put together a story from either scenario. But B is going to require a lot of revision because it lacks inherent conflict. The situation is emotional, maybe stressful, but dealing with it will be like trying to push a soggy noodle across a cutting board.

As for originality, all this means is questioning whether your idea is identical to seventy other stories already out there on the shelves or whether you’ve come up with one slightly different aspect than the pack.

Consider the premise of an English child leaving home and going to boarding school.

Off the top of my head, I can immediately think of Tom Brown’s Schooldays, Nicholas Nickleby, A Little Princess, and Harry Potter and the Sorceror’s Stone.  Identical premise; all different from each other. They stand out from countless forgettable imitations. Sara Crewe is a girl, her home is in India, and she falls from riches to rags. Harry Potter is attending a boarding school for wizards.

So does your idea have a little twist or a different angle that will set it apart? In the 1920s when Agatha Christie’s The Murder of Roger Ackroyd came out, a number of critics yelled “Cheat!” But everyone else was thinking, “Wow!” The book is still in print today, over 80 years later, and its plot twist is still stunning those who read it for the first time.

You don’t have to be brilliant. You just have to offer something slightly different from what everyone else is doing.

So, if your idea doesn’t conform to what other authors are doing, don’t squelch its individuality! Don’t lose your nerve!

Instead, believe in your idea and have faith in it. And if your faith feels utterly blind, that’s okay. Learn to take creative risks.

Maybe you feel no faith in your premise whatsoever. In that case, pretend to have faith by carrying on anyway.

Scared or not, you proceed, one page at a time. And you don’t quit until you can type “The End” at the conclusion of your draft.

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Dramatic Strategy III: Changing Things Around

If you follow the Dwight Swain/Jack Bickham school of thought regarding writing technique, then you know that the basic foundation of fiction plotting involves alternating scenes and sequels dovetailing together in a smooth progression of story.

However, once you’ve gotten the hang of writing scenes and sequels, you’ll find yourself confronted by its one big drawback:  predictability. Savvy writers, therefore, keep their readers guessing by mixing the order of these dramatic units.

How?

Step 1: Write your rough draft in scene/sequel/scene/sequel/scene/sequel pattern. Keep everything steady and on track from start to finish.

Step 2: In revision, once you’ve determined that your plot is solid and you’ve plugged any holes, then determine where the story seems to bog down a bit or where it becomes ho-hum. Look for extra-long sequels or scenes that end without a setback or set a weak hook. These danger points need jazzing up.

Step 3: Buy yourself two packs of 3 X 5 index cards in two different colors. Number and summarize each scene on one color of cards. Number and summarize each sequel on the other color. Pin them up on a wall or spread them across a long table. This will help distance you from your story so that you can think about it more objectively. Flag the danger spots with a marker or a Post-It.

Step 4: If you want to amp up the excitement at a certain section of the novel, then remove or compress the sequels between a pair of important scenes. Let your protagonist start to react, but the events of the story crowd in and the sequel is deferred. Doing this between two or three scenes will create what’s known as a SCENE CLUSTER. It carries the same effect as a BIG SCENE.

Step 5: When you defer sequels in order to keep the action exciting and intense, then know that you will need to write a long sequel that spans reaction to the whole scene cluster. John D. MacDonald is a master of this technique, and his Travis McGee novels are worth study.

Step 6: You can eliminate a weak scene by keeping the sequel that sets it up, then remove the scene and “jump” forward in the story’s action to a more exciting point. A simple paragraph of narrative summary can “fold back” to inform readers of what happened in the scene that didn’t play.

This sampling of tactics will keep your story less predictable and far more exciting to read. When you shift the dramatic pattern this way, you’re controlling reader response while providing maximum entertainment value.

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